Where We going?

Final Rating: 3.52. Finished: 46 out of 85 entries.
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Animator: peter adams

Description: Our character tries to make small-talk with his kidnappers!
It'll never work though!

Experience: mainly with technical illustrations, i work inside Rolls-Royce, Derby

Time taken: 6 Hours (ish)

Comments:

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Taber Dunipace:

Clever idea but somehow didn't really flow the way it could've. Kudos on a good camera move though.

Julianne McCartney:

I'm not too clear on how the character feels throughout the piece. The expressions were kinda everywhere.

Mike York:

I like your lighting :-)

The camera that pulls out in the end is a little strange.

Sergey B.:

nice but i think that lipsinc is not realy good.
Good luck

Tomas Jech:

The lip sync is tremendously unclear.

Ken Rice:

Sorry not very keen on this animation - not a whole lot is going on and the lipsync is out a fair bit.

Mark Stoughton:

Great situation. A litle more exaggeration in the characters movements would improve this a lot

Aaron Clement:

Looks great.

elizabeth:

too much movement on the eyebrows. not good

HARISH:

I feel that only one character does not convey the story much.

Greg M. Johnson:

Good facial expressions.

Jerome Heuze:

the eyebrows are that great.

Adam Clark:

nice gag, pretty good staging, however I would like to see at least one of the other characters

Christopher Salamat:

His emotion isn't that readable especially in the closeup.

Sunny Kharbanda:

The face is overanimated in the first part. You could cut down the number of expressions by half or so, and only hit an expression when there's a real change inside the character's mind.

Ceno:

im really like that

Beth:

I love it, but at the beginning his pupils are small, he blinks, and they become huge. Otherwise I think it is exelent

Juan Z.:

good i dea. work on the animation a bit more.

Erik Westlund:

He is friends with people who are going to interrogate him... hummm.... Your story concept is not supported by the audio. Just the question alone "Where are we going?" bears conflicts with the reality of someone tied up in a chair. The eyebrows are a little too active, switching between positive and negative expressions in broad changes but without much reason. Lip-sync could be articulated with a little more clarity.

Derek Mabson:

Too much eyebrow business, otherwise good job

Ron Price:

Nice looking, but a number of the facial expressions and motions seem arbitrary and unmotivated. I love the little kick at the end!