one bad apple

Final Rating: 4.51. Finished: 30 out of 85 entries.
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Animator: wilson henrique vesco

Description: It was the first thing that came to my mind when I heard the audio. but I took too long to start animating...

Experience: some

Time taken: 2 crazy days

Comments:

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Andrew Linke:

i think this has a bunch of potential but wish it was finished.

Jason:

shoot it on ones

Julianne McCartney:

I really like these characters! I love seeing traditional pieces. This is cool. I'm assuming that there wasn't enough time but this is a great start!

Taber Dunipace:

Nice setup, design and acting in this piece, but it did need more inbetweens to get fluid natural motion.

Josh Doohen:

super idea!! hard to see the anim though...more interaction and frames needed on some of the worms.

Victor Wong:

Excellent expressions. More tweens would be a good idea.

Levi:

Haha, clever!

andyM:

looks promising, any chance you'll finish it?

Alexandar Ivanchev:

Great characters. I like the drawing style. But it seems like the animation needs more frames for smoothness.

Ricardo Vicens:

The character are appealing and the it's a clever idea, but it feels like it's still in blocking. With polish this shot has a lot of potential.

Adam Clark:

Almost, needs more finish and polish

Sunny Kharbanda:

With worms as the characters, this could have been pushed to great extremes and could have been a memorable piece!

Aaron Clement:

I like the facial expression a lot... the timing felt a little off... not too bad overall.

Ceno:

i like 2d!

Helen Cranston:

Shame you didnt finish the inbetweens there. Otherwise really nice.

Erik Westlund:

Rapid pats are not justified. Your concept is cute but you haven't worked it all out. Nice distinctions between character designs. Overshoot on fat worm when laughing is a bit too much; doesn't match the audio. Lip-sync and movement could use more inbetweens but the timing and initial spacing appears pretty good so far.

Christiaan Moleman:

Really nice how you got the acting in there with just the body attitude and the expressions. Can't think of anything to crit except it's a little hard to see some of the lines. Maybe try and increase the contrast digitally, or use darker lines.

Jason Smith:

Nice idea.

Max Rodriguez:

Nice clean drawings, but I can't read any emotions.

Jorge Zagatto:

good, need inbetweens

James Stevenson:

interesting idea - flesh it out a little and it could be a nice little piece.