Jerry Zigounakis:

This is very funny. I am a little unsure with the police officer though. I'm not sure if she's hanging out with them or not

Julianne McCartney:

Great punchline but the acting is stiff.

Jason:

lol

Taber Dunipace:

Nice setup, but not a lot happens action-wise. Still, that upside down guy is hilarious.

Frank G:

Interesting concept.

Emmanuel Vergne:

lol
I like the idea, but at the beginning when the second character (the hanged one) speaks for the first time, we don't really understand where this voice comes from and so we loose attention for a moment

Greg M. Johnson:

Excellent staging.

Jerome Heuze:

I would work on the laugh animation.

Daniel Luke:

I really liked the concept, but I felt the characters could've had some more movement in them. Perhaps the police-lady could've been forcing him up off the ground and getting him to walk, even though he's drunk.
Nice work!

Erik Westlund:

A noble attempt to handle various challenging elements in the audio. Unfortunately, I don't feel you have met a basic level of believability. I can't imagine a police officer pulling a gun on injured and handcuffed drivers just because they are laughing at a joke. A simple tap on the shoulder with a night stick might have worked better. I might have been willing to go along with character hanging from signal lights if it didn't look like he was there by choice. Poses are stiff because line-of-action for all are straight up and down and don't change. Line-of-action for poses should be curved with a slant or tilt, and the line-of-action should change or shift in the performances to emphasize accents in dialog or specific story beats. In addition to poses with reversals in the line-of-action, shoulders, hips, eye lines, etc. should be on slight angles instead of being level/horizontal throughout. Staging is working as a nice setup to the punchline.

Mauro Alemanno:

the chars are too freeze...try to add some movements

Max Rodriguez:

jeff:

good concept but acting is weak....