Munchnik tryout
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Hernán Bruna:
Needs a lot of work
Erik Westlund:
Ok, so remove the beard and armor from the texture file and give her a wig or something. I'm not interested in reading a sign that says in essence, "Working creatively within my limited resources is something I take seriously." If you want people to take your work seriously, then you need to take the time they spend reviewing your work seriously as well.
Taber Dunipace:
Well... I get it. It's pretty poor quality but I do understand it so you've got that going for you.
The motion is very soft and floaty, a hallmark of incomplete CG animation. Try to work on your timing and inbetweens.
Markus Kallio:
please, for love of all holy, use the free rigs available on this site...
Shai Kalev:
I liked the general idea.
Max Herzfeld:
Nice idea with the audition, but if you add an element like that you have to play to it. Obviously you have a man trying out, untap the humor with some acting things for him and some surprise from the caster. But that's story, what you realy should work on are the basic elements to get realism into your movements.
Keep going though, nice start.
Aaron Clement:
Okay, interesting take. The camera angle kind takes you out of the scene... it's almost like where looking through a security camera. Watch the guys eyeline... he doesn't look as though he's looking straight ahead.
Imus zai:
love the concept of the story!!!
Dan Weiland:
Be careful not to have a character's feet slide unless it's completely obvious as to why they are sliding (a dance of some sort, for example).
Cameron Huber:
The animation is very snappy and the character "mrs munchnik" holds her hand out way too long.









Animator: adam
Description: Mrs Munchnik is a man! Didn't see that one coming.
Experience: student
Time taken: 3 days