Daniel Huertas:

Veo que estas mejorando compadre! ;) pero necesitas aun estudiar los principios de la animacion, los cortes de camara estuvieron bien pero tendrias que haber planeado mejor la ejecucion y lo que quieres mostrar en tu performance... al final hubiera sido mas claro de que el hubiera tratado de acuchillarla y ella de repente voltea yendose.. y el como que se cae o algo asi.. pero igual buen intento... suerte!

Hernán Bruna:

Thanks all for the critics, i'll learn a lot from them.

Erik Westlund:

concept needs a much better setup. We don't see either of these characters thinking, they are both just reacting. Why does the "killer" wear a mask when he knows the '"victim" who appears to be blind? Continuity breaks with change in staging. "Walk-cycle" at end should have been done with at least a few keyframes/contacts if no time remained for inbetweening.

Chris Sacco:

Wait until the lady fully walks away before the guy drops the stuff. That would allow for better comedic timing.

Taber Dunipace:

I can't tell what's happening because the drawings are unclear. Plan your actions out better next time and consider taking video-reference of yourself.

Imus zai:

Nice idea!!!!! I love the story!
critique:
the cake apears from nowhere on the table?
He drops the cake too early - you should wait for the lady to turn then say 'remarkably....' then he should grab the knife and when she say's 'last year' then he could drop the cake?

Henning Koczy:

Pretty clumsy staging. And where's the fruitcake come from?

sharad kumar:

maybe you should come clear a bit more on this concept!!!

Matt Kenley:

dont get it

Peter Carisi - de Lappe:

Funny concept! Keep Going!

Kat Curry:

funny idea, but ....thats about it

Yem Xnake Yu:

haha,good idea!

Jay Grenier:

Though the concept is good, it seems you tried to fit maybe one too many ideas into it as some parts don't read. Gotta respect anyone who attempts 2D, so you've got my nod, but the animation itself could use a lot more polish.

Aaron Clement:

The ending was the best bit. The cut away to the old lady didn't work for me... Needed more controle with the line work... good effort, though.

Ratul Sarna:

great idea!