Fruitcake

Final Rating: 3.69. Finished: 42 out of 63 entries.
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Animator: Dhar

Description: Only two days to finally come up with a concept and put it together real quick, and last minute changes to boot. Your crits is what I am interested in.

Best Wishes.

Experience: No professional experience

Time taken: Two days

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Jason Smith:

That was awesome.

Daniel Huertas:

LOL

luc:

FUN :)

Will Mann:

Great concept. Animation seems a little floaty though.

Brian Nicolucci:

A very funny idea.
The animation on the guy, especially the "yes" bit show some nice acting choices.
I like his first set of poses between 31 and 74, but the timing is very linear and even.
Hate the design on the female character as it is hard to read expressions on her, though what you did on "a fruitcake" is another vey well thought out idea. Her lip sync at the end is pretty far off though.
Very nice effort, one of your best yet Dhar!

Erik Westlund:

Cute play on the word "fruitcake"! Sense of humor seems to be in the right place. Poses could use with some improvement, although some attention has been paid to line of action, silhouette, etc. Parts of characters are animated while the rest is largely still, instead all elements of character should seem to move as a unified whole. Staging is a big problem causing confusion in screen direction/movement. Characters are overlapping which makes things hard to read. Some hint of believable gestures but needs to be developed.

Frank G:

Great character design. Interesting concept. Good acting.

Taber Dunipace:

I'm... pretty confused on the story here, but I'll just move on to the animation.

Try to pose your characters a bit more naturally; film yourself for reference.

Aaron Clement:

Haha... funny stuff. Love the concept a lot... you made you laugh... and my brother...

Tim Nowak:

HAHA! Your on the same page as the last contester. This was funny and you had good animation skills. But a little stiff with the actors.

Cameron Huber:

Some of the poses slide between each other a little, however I like the idea :)

Mat Brady:

Clever.

jonathan topf:

haha

Ian Johnston:

Nice creative setup. I like the punchline and reference to the word use. I would have liked to see the secondary movement on the jewelry around the neck and wrist.

Joe Jacob:

Dig the idea.

arunprasad:

animation little bit floaty.and do not add your photos in your work

Renn:

Ingenious use of the sound clip. Brilliant animation overall, with just a few moments of awkward mouth movement from Mrs Munch. Maybe its just the model?

Great work!

Kat Curry:

unique take on fruitcake.

Ambuj:

:D

Brad Regier:

that's pretty funny!

Amy:

Good drawing and animation but I don't get it.

Ben Hammersley:

funny stuff.