Blaine Toderian:

I love the pose with his hat out! Keep polishing the movements, adding a little more life to the body.

Hernán Bruna:

Uhmm I wouldnt have change the camera, the animation is good but you need more exageration

Alonso Soriano:

feel like there should be a more textured movement of the hat when he's talking but we can't see his face. I love the reading guy, especially when he looks away for help, but he feels a little bit pose to posey. I love the restrained gesture for Todas. But after the Todas gesture he doesn't seem to do much, you coasted up til then with the standing up, but once he's standing there just talking he doesn't feel alive and emoting any longer.

Kevin Scott:

cam cut was kinda harsh.

Augusto Goicoechea:

I think the idea is good, but need to be realised.

Jonay O. Urbina:

the camera change is a bit confusing to me. but i really like this one

Salvador García Luque:

Excellent animation and the situation you put in the audience is very good, but the character is not energetic enough and I think it needs more cartonish moves, and the gestures need to be angrier.

Martin Silfvast:

looks a bit pose to pose.
Nice staging and camera

Mark Persson:

Good anim!!!!
You have all the key frames set. Next step should be to make the Character more alive. From this point the character are to stiff... you need to make the movement more smoooothen out.
The face expression needs also more work!

Reed:

I loved the higher pitched voice. LOL

Ali Tezel:

This is awesome, the guys attitude cracked me up. I think you can push some of the poses more exaggerated which will make it even better.

Great job!

Ashley Stringer:

very nice interaction with the objects and the other character.

well done

Ryan Chan:

Looks good, but it looks like you ran out of time. The movements in the beginning look nice and smooth but the movements toward the end look more stiff and not quite at the final stage.

Avner Engel:

really nice simplistic staging that put you right there with the characters.
I like the energy you have going, the one thing that threw me off was the SL character looking at the camera. It broke the energy for me and took the attention off the SR character.

Dave Blanchette:

Nice work.
The edit feels rough - maybe because the shots are too similar. Try going from a long to a medium or medium to close?

Eric Huelin:

The reader seems to have a strange reaction to the other.

rob eddy:

nice, i like when the second guy looks away around 180, funny stuff