Sergio the Dissenting Juror
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Andrew:
yikes! those secondary characters move like...i dunno but, yikes!
Paul Naas:
I'm surprised you'd add subtitles when you still have stepped keys in parts of the shot. The time would have been better spent polishing your performance.
Juan Calderon:
good effort, needs work on the secondary characters performance seems at the end one of the characters is still in blocking stage. but the main character is coming along purty good. keep at it
rob eddy:
the secondary characters need a little more work. his chest jerks forward in 'todas'. good start though keep working on it will be good
Blaine Toderian:
I think adding some anticipation, especially to the 'todas' delivery would give it some more energy. It's good to keep the secondary characters animation minimal, but this may be too minimal.
Martin Silfvast:
Looks very pose to pose. Its very stiff.
Salvador García Luque:
It feels like stop-motion, the poses and gestures are great. And I liked a lot the fact that you subtitled it
Ashley Stringer:
well done, i really like this.
Brad Regier:
Nice work on the Andy rig.
Vinod Kanna. K:
Good effort... funny movements for the secondary characters... I think there is some timing problem here and there...
Yuriko:
I like it! It has an atmosphere.
Thomas Dumont:
Nice animation but it needs more "smooth motions" especially on the main character when he move back. Whay a pitty that the extra are less animated
Mark Persson:
The lipsync are very good, need only some polish.
The character needs more body movement and more face expressions. Try to show more what the main character are "thinking"!
Carlos Fins:
That poke is funny, pretty good attempt. :)
Johnne Tyson:
Needs smoothing out. Losing some of your fun bits there.
Mark Wheeler:
Some movements on side characters appear linear and poppy. Watch for hand slides while the main speaking character moves about. Relax main characters fingers: right thumb at the beginning.
David Shum:
I like the set up of your shot, haha.
The big idiot, who still believes the defendant guilty.
You might've ran out of time, but there are several things popping in the shot. Would love to see those fixed up =D
Alonso Soriano:
he could be smoothed out, there's not a lot of overlap in him, the side characters are distracting in their stillness
ananga:
Nice animation ..still can be improved more....
Dave Blanchette:
Good start! Looks like you could've used more time for further passes.
Arief Leuvenardi:
Nice idea but the guy moves funny
Sunny Kharbanda:
You probably already noticed this, but the last action in the scene (from the juror on the right) isn't all that clear. I had to pause and scrub through to see that he was tossing a sheet of paper on the table.
Good work on the lipsync. I'm glad you kept the main character's animation simple!
Manjoe Chan:
the animation has a stop animation feel to it. don't know if you were trying to ge that effect?









Animator: Alex Crouch
Description: The guy in the sound file sounded like some sort of stupid fanatic, so that's what I wanted Sergio to be. I don't speak Spanish so lip sync was an interesting challenge, but not very different from English.
Experience: Several years working with Maya
Time taken: 12 days or so