Nick Malutama:

I think the camera change was a little abrupt. Good acting though

Brad Bradbury:

There isn't really any reason to have a camera cut. The new camera makes everything symmetrical and less interesting in terms of design.

Blaine Toderian:

I like this one! It feels like some of his movements are underwater... they're evenly spaced and a little slow. Try hitting some poses faster, and holding them.

Mark Persson:

Very nice!!! Very good body expression! The character feels alive. Nice idea to change the camera view.

But it needs more work on the lipsync!

rob eddy:

i really like the acting, just lip sync looks off. work on that will be a nice piece

Traci Plagmann:

Good acting choices. See if you can keep from twinning his arms though. I don't think the camera change really adds anything. I think the first camera angle throughout is more appealing.

Augusto Goicoechea:

I like the acting!

Ashley Stringer:

its ok but some of the poses seem a little twinned.

never the less well done

Yuriko:

Nice
For "todas" too big anticipation ,i think.

Johnne Tyson:

Weird jump cut. I think this one could have done better with just one camera. Poses are a bit too broad for this scene. Nice though.

Ian Jacobson:

I'm not liking that cut.

Nicola:

The animation is great on this, though at times the lip sync seems to be a little out. Like the idea though.

Mark Wheeler:

Try putting more still posses to break up the actions. Camera change seems unesseary.

Matt Kelly:

weird camera change... work on the lipsync.. too much movement.. always moving.. hold a pose and show an expression change.. it's almost always a bad idea to act directly to camera

Ivan:

nice expresion on the face but not good animation

Alonso Soriano:

I don't see a reason for the cut, and it's distracting.
the movement looks nice, but it feels a little repetive, lift the arms, lift the arms, try varying things up some

Alex Jansen:

I wouldnt cut to another angle...pick on and stick to it

Paul Wei:

Nice poses but a bit floaty in between the transitions.

Manjoe Chan:

lip syncing needs a lot of work. i like the point down at the table but other poses seem too similar.