Cosa_Mzz
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Blaine Toderian:
To me, it seems as if he is a little drunk; his body is always moving, and he seems unbalanced as he gets up and leaves. The acting is coming along very well, I like it; just loosen up and polish the facial animation, and perhaps adjust the pose where is pointing toward the court.
Ian Hernandez:
Alot of poping at the beginning but the end is pretty good
Martin Silfvast:
This really looks like the original '12 angry men', cool.
The animation feels a little bit stiff and jagged, maybe have a look at your curves and do some ease in and out and perhaps some overlapping animation?
Augusto Goicoechea:
I like, but I think needs more work with the animation...like ease in and ease out, and things like that you have to care in the animation.
rob eddy:
good stuff, i dont see any movement in the shoulders/torso when he's shaking his head. it'd be slight but would help loosen up character
Ashley Stringer:
i like how to have used a lot of the poses from the actual movie, the only problem with that is that it doesn't give much in the way of exaggeration, remember animators do what live actors can't thats why we animate.
well done though i really like this.
Nicola:
The lip sync is good here but some of the movements are a little snappy.
Andrew:
arm movements need to be smoother
Alonso Soriano:
the leans and tips and movement of the spine should affect all the way down to the seat of his pants that he's sitting on
nadja kapeller:
looks like clay animation - interesting!
Juan Calderon:
good effort, take a look at frame 149 his hand is sliding.
suggestion don't have the character leave at the endit takes away from his conviction
Eric Huelin:
When he does the motion of putting his hand on the rial it's a bit too jagged.
There should be contrast in how much his mouth opens when he says "todas!"
Rómulo Lazarde:
english lypsinc
Mel Gonzalez:
I like this character and this is a good beginning. however watch your curves you have some flat spots it seems kind of jerky and he moves in some straight lines here and there.









Animator: MAURICIO MAZZA
Description: A witness protest.
Experience: About 6 years
Time taken: 6 hours