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Kensaba:
Some nice poses you set, but avoid arms moving all the time, make them stop (moving holds) sometimes, and move again. The audio is delayed also. Keep going
Brad Bradbury:
I don't understand the arm gestures with what he is saying like the swinging from 83-99 does it relate to the dialog? Keep things simpler.
Sean Thorpe:
Maybe a little too poppy and too many poses..
Nice though. Good Job :)
Matt Hirengen:
I like your acting, but watch your arcs.
Rachel G.:
I love that beginning hand movement with him rubbing his head. I think after that point, though, the performance became more about the hands than the rest of the body and the face, and you are doing some nice things up there, but the hands distracted me from them the first viewing.
Salvador García Luque:
I don't like the pose for the word "todas" and "idiot". The animation between these words feels like trying to catch the rhythm of the audio. The first part is excellent.
Ashley Stringer:
i love this all the way up to frame 114 after that it just seams to brake apart with the acting, seams a little to fast.
but up to then very well done.
David Higgins:
This is another one where the dialogue seems to have been offset by a few frames.
Yuriko:
Very expressive! Good work. Just try to correct brows - sometimes they have unbelievable shapes.
Johnne Tyson:
A little too much arm movement. They steal away from you facial acting. It starts off nice and subtle but then gets carried away. Even though the dialogue builds up, the hand movements are too all over the place...
Andrew:
timing way off
Mark Wheeler:
The character seems to go through a lot of emotions in too short of a time, not quite matching the audio.
Matt Kelly:
looks good.. goes a little overboard and muddy around TODAS
David Thomson:
You've got way to much going on there.
David Shum:
Woah! thats a pretty entertaining shot.
Very colourful, and sensual in some moments! hahaha.
Alonso Soriano:
too much happening, too many ideas so the ideas don't come across clearly
Michael Carter:
don't know if the timing was a rendering issue or not but it really got off track at the "TODAS" part...
Shakaib Feroz:
Not bad. Some movements look a bit floaty, specially the arms movement between 80 to 100. The ending pose and expression is really great. The overall acting makes the guy look rather effeminate. Is that deliberate??
This effeminate thingie doesn't go too well with the tone, though. But yes, nice animation!
Juan Calderon:
great expression at the end, i like how he moves his boody, ok work keep working on it you'll get there
Ramesh:
timing little bit offset
rob eddy:
that final pose is great
luv2animate:
I like ur animation but the palms look too much loose!!









Animator: marwa hassan
Description: he was depressed while he was trying to prove his point of view
Experience: 4 years in 3d
Time taken: 7 days