Brad Bradbury:

The neck on this model is very hard to control. frame 79 and 88 for example. Be mindful of maintaining the volume and the look of the model as you pose.

Hugo Cierzniak:

On an character acting, I guess it's the character who is supposed to insist on "todas"...not the camera....

Blaine Toderian:

The acting choices in the first third feel natural; it seems to clash with the type of acting you've chosen at the end. Perhaps removing some the less important gestures will help it feel more consistent. The motion is looking good.

rob eddy:

good job, lip sync looks good throughout except at the end it looks off a little right before 'idiota'

Matt Hirengen:

good job, but I find the camera moves a bit jarring...might just be a personal preference thing though. your animation is really solid.

Paul Naas:

I found the camera moves distracting.

jess vickery:

whoa. not bad despite the bizarre distracting mustache. what up with that?

Vinod Kanna. K:

Really good.... Nicely executed the emotion on the face throughout... even being anger and frustrated, I could find this more cartoonic and funny...

Shakaib Feroz:

That's some good stuff over here!! Great acting, camera work is used very nicely, great expressions and everything. I just think the walk could be improved a bit.

Very impressive!

Thomas Dumont:

Good but to many hand motions at the end.

KISHORE:

i like the cam use

Curtis:

His right arm feels a little disjointed from the shoulder. I think some more anticipation, follow through, and overlap coming from the shoulder would make the motions feel more weighted. Particularly at the end. As well watch your silhouettes. Think about keeping the shapes of the body clean and smooth.

I liked the over all timing of the piece, had some great energy and I think your were able to find some great beats to animate to in the dialogue. keep up the great work!

Mark Persson:

Nice made, but it needs more work though...

Keep up with good work!

Ashley Stringer:

really nice well done.

Nicola:

Love the movements. The only thing I can pick at is the last few seconds of lip sync that seem to be out.

Alonso Soriano:

I don't feel solid storytelling poses that have all the body parts working together towards one idea. twiddly fingers by the head is a little vaudeville

Jonay O. Urbina:

I like the closer shut when he says TODAS. I prefer the acting on the first half

David Shum:

Mmmm you might want to be more careful with balancing this super top heavy character. Several times in this shot, I feel like he's going to flop over. hahaha.

Also, didn't get the smile at 246. Perhaps its not a smile... But in contrast to the rest of the shot...

Ivan:

to much movement, not clear expression

Ryan Chan:

I think the camera move was a little unnecessary, but great effort overall

Juan Calderon:

might want to keep tha camera steady, its not necessary, work on the characters expression, try to understand and develop his personality

Mel Gonzalez:

watch the cliche hand gestures.