Chris Bryer:

I wish i could see this from a different camera angle... the kid is right in back of the foreground character and it took a little bit for me to figure out what they were doing. at first i thought the kid was imitating the character then realized he'se trying to pull him. a different angle may help explain things better. character is also looking off screen from the 1/3 to 1/2 position and i want to see more of where he is looking at... if character was more on the right side of the screen (kid starts on the left) and i saw the struggle between the two spread out through the scene, it may work better. really like the last part where he's saying 'what do you think i am..."

Hugo Cierzniak:

Too bad is turning back on "todas"....he really should shout it in the front of the camera!!

Alonso Soriano:

I like andy, it's a clever idea that he's holding him back, but maybe it's the fisheye lens, but it doesn't really feel like Teddy is being that affected by Andy, and I can't tell what happens, does Teddy hit him, or just throw him off. Then after all that fighting Teddy just takes a half step forwards and gesture with both hands doesn't seem to match the earlier intention.

rob eddy:

good stuff, main character's lip sync looks good and like his gestures a lot. think second character takes away from it some. at first looks like main chracter being held back just before second character starts holding him, then the big move to push the second guy back doesn't seem to be a push. primary character looks good though

Matt Hirengen:

the physics on the kid could be better.

Jeff Simon:

what is going on with the guy in the back

Jonay O. Urbina:

I would stop moving the arms a bit. I love when he says TODAS

ryan Sowiak:

cool I love the ULTRA wide angle lens on this one!

Augusto Goicoechea:

...I like the acting, but I think it needs more work in the animation.

Martin Silfvast:

interesting camera. The guy in the back seems a bit floaty in his pulling action. The main characters hand movement at the end looks repetitive.
Nice idea, good effort

Carlos Chavez:

too much twinning at the ending,..

Subramanian.R:

Not bad. I think If you concentate on wight sifting and timing (slow in ,slow out) it comes better..

Andrew:

i love the perspective. would have liked it better if he was looking more toward the cam to fully get the expression of his face

Andrew Harding:

The expressions on the main character's face here could be a bit more varied, feels a bit generic. Like the setting, though, and the second character trying to restrain the main character (plus love the take on the second character reacting to pain, it's not too centered on the main character).

Julio Cardenes:

good idea, be careful with the floating

Lavendra Love:

only a problem with camera angle you have used

Johnne Tyson:

Nice concept, the could have struggled a bit more. And is he only talking to one person?

Ashley Stringer:

quite nice, the poses ain't that readable though.

try rotating the camera around his body to the left, might help the poses more.

well done

Matt Kelly:

band angle to show off the struggle.. weird use of fish eye

Mark Wheeler:

The choice of camera angle on the characters is a bit awkward. When the speaking character breaks away, he doesn’t quite go anywhere but the person in the back seems to move to far back.

Ivan:

nice expresion on the face but the animation is good

Jorge Zagatto:

Great effort! I liked some of the solutions, but it lacks power! Break the chains!

Michael Carter:

he was very angry when the kid was holding him back but the energy dropped as soon as he broke free...

Alex Jansen:

Change your lens length...you basically have a fish eye lens on - very distracting

Ryan Chan:

the audio hurt my ears a little.... i think i see blood.

Igor Medovshikov:

Main character's upper lip doesn't seem to close. But I really like the scenario!

Eric Huelin:

It appears as if the puller gets pushed away before fore character pushes.

Giuseppe:

I thing this one of the best Ideas! The hands are sometimes moving too much and also too fast. I miss a strong pose in the final part. Also a little bit more attention to weighting and spaing is needed. Good poses in the first part.

Fernando Porcel:

Nice approach to the dialogue.
Perhaps the secondary character distracts a bit on the dialogue. But nice poses and gestures on the main character. Only a comment. Cheers!!

Nicola:

I like the idea and the lip sync on this. Maybe some more motion in the head?