There's a moment

Final Rating: 5.73. Finished: 15 out of 71 entries.
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Animator: Christopher Sosa

Description: Here it is, my first entry to the 11secondclub! Before working on the clip I spent a lot of time acting it.

Don't judge me, but lots of my ideas came to me in the shower. Must be the Shampoo- I steal it from my wife.

Hope you enjoy.

Experience: 1.5 yrs experience professionally

Time taken: I worked on the clip off and on for about a 10 days.

Comments:

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Andrew Bina:

Good

Christopher Sosa:

Hey this is MINE!

Chris Welsby:

nice work!

Tomislav Belacic:

I see awesome animation!! Very good job!

Mike Clark:

i like your acting choices. the hands seem a little weightless when she pulls back in, maybe her body dosen't support the movement...?

Eric Huang:

My only crit is that in some parts of this, she almost looks happy... I would push the facial expressions.

David Humphreys:

Lots of twinning on your first three poses.

And i dont know why you carried on past the audio clip

Tom Law:

I really like the animation at the very end.

Tyler Phillips:

Nice subtle acting.

Cole Higgins:

nice job. Keep animating and really push those emotions harder. Its a nice piece.

Aaron Clement:

Good last half. Don't know why you kept animating when the audio finished, though. Good expressive posing.

Jamal D. Owens:

Nice movements. I like how smooth it is.

garvey harris:

yer, was good, very good, just could've been stronger in emotional acting when she refers to the other persons moment, but really nice finish with the expression at the end

C. J. Cow:

great effort!

Ezra Allen:

nice anim, I can really tell your using Ik on the arms though, especially at the start when she slides herarms forward on the table, work on making that look more natural. Its adecent anim though.

Chris Sutherland:

love the deep breath after the clip ends

Simon Bean:

Framed really nicely, convincing situation for the lip. I Love the "i don't know" and "i bet" sections especially. They really capture the emotion the best. The final look away is lovely, but ask yourself, 'what am i trying to translate' with the few eye moves beforehand. It's a bit unclear to me.
I would re-think the "give in" pose
Hope that helps :)

Mike Courtney:

The accents in the lip-sync are not strong enough. While the base of the spine moves, it also needs to curve throughout a bit.

Victor Wong:

Some twinning happening in the beginning, but after that things look pretty good.

Taber Dunipace:

This is pretty good! I would say that some of the animation lacked impact where it was needed and I didn't see very good anticipations during the fast actions. Nice acting overall!

Phillip Moon:

very nicely done. I like the hand work with the thumb, the shoulders and face.

Virgil Mihailescu:

it starts really good. but then there are some problems in the lipsync and the animation is not accurate enough - let's say there is some inbetween stuff that's not sharp enough, like the timing of certain gestures. very nice stuff overall, but it can be polished and improved

Michael Richard:

I'm entranced by how awesome the hands/shoulders moved... when those hands are one the table, they have a really good weight and feel to them. The only thing I would say about this one would be the emotions on her are a little subtle.

Gregory Marlow:

alright animation but she looks too happy.

Jeranimo:

Good effort. Though, I can see too much twinning. And there is no need for the last part where she looks to her left.

Matt Johnson:

Nice Job. Like the hand movements. Still feels a little loose, but its very well done.

Max Herzfeld:

Good work so far, especially gestures and facials, but the movments are a bit stop and go right now.

Work on smoothing it up with a natural flow.

Max

Bilal Ahmad:

nice effort!

Sean Graham:

You knnow what? This is reaslly close. She's a little floaty. I'd go in and see where I can tighten things up some. There's really good stuff happening here though.