C. J. Cow:

great effort

Christopher Sosa:

Looks like this would have been really good.

yeshwanth:

Its very beautiful very good work ...

David Atkins:

pretty cool!

David Ruzicka:

nice work

Kristoffer Clark:

The transition from poses was very smooth. Good job!

Tyler Phillips:

This was pretty good.

Cole Higgins:

cool movement but some of her poses dont really fit the dialogue. Also dont animate her mouth to every word, it looks like shes moveing her mouth a little too much. Great effort though.

Aaron Clement:

Interesting... was she talking to God? I take it her pet died. I like the last pose she settles into.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Nice job, great to see some 2d action!

Jamal D. Owens:

Nice. Glad to see some 2D. The lip sync is a little off from the dialog, but good overall. Good Job.

garvey harris:

again for me its about the interpretation, you can animate, just don't think the concept was right, I couldn't see it. but great animation work

praveen:

i can hardly see the animation

Ezra Allen:

cant really see this one, you need to mess with the contrast in photoshop, cant really judge this.

Simon Bean:

Nice. Remember to keep the character's mass at all times. She shrinks towards the end. Before you start, draw out a model sheet, and keep all elements of the body the same as the model at all times

miles southan:

Nice work! The main thing you need to do is pay attention to your arcs. There's a lot of straight horizontal and vertical (even zigzaggy) movement happening.

Mike Courtney:

The girl loses form and volume as the animation progresses.

Max Herzfeld:

It looks pretty good xcept for a few things.
Tone the the mouth movement down for more realism.
Vary the movements, the whole time if she moved she was moving down. It was too steady, and unreal.

Overall good work,

keep it up.
/\/\@>< (Max)

Felix:

cool work really nice drawing :)) very good acting

Mark Dickie:

Nice work! Simple, but effective

Phillip Moon:

Well done. Nice body and face work.

Sean Graham:

Awesome! I admire anyone who can successfully animate in 2D. Well done.

Virgil Mihailescu:

impressive, but hard to see... also, the story twist doesn't seem very logical. she's accusing the little creature of... what? giving in? strange. (let me explain - the "I bet you" states it clearly, it's an accusation)

Gregory Marlow:

looks pretty good

Taber Dunipace:

Kudos for trying the 2D animation method! You need to learn to draw more solid forms to correctly animate a full character with pencil. Keep practicing and maybe try the Preston Blair book for a start.

Paulo Clayton:

Very, very cool. Love the hand-drawn 2D work. Well synced, very artistic and well-expressed.

Victor Wong:

Reproduction is a little bright, but as far as I can tell the lip sync and timing are ok.

Srikanth:

Always nice to see a 2d work.. good job.. lipsync is little off

Bilal Ahmad:

nice effort!