Jason Pennington:

Very strong entry! I think I'd like to see her swing around more strongly on the beat the first time she says "moment". It would start the piece off with more impact.

Taylor Potts:

Nice sense of weight/presence. Good choice to slide her down the wall. Watch the over extension of the left arm IK handle around frame 120.
Maybe consider losing the nose wipe in favor of just a sniff. The action is a little fast and doesn't read that well (like a punch to her face). Good job overall.

Paul Yan:

Watch out for IK pop on 110

Max Herzfeld:

It looks really good, except for a few details.

Clearify the character's focus, who is she talking to? and make sure the face is visible.

Gesture when neccessary.

That's all for now,
Great job.
Max

Eric Huang:

Good looking animation!
From about frame 112 to about frame 152, it feels a bit floaty to me. To me, the character lacks focus, what's causing this character to act this way? It reads more like she's just doing a monologue on stage in a play or something.

Chris Welsby:

some nice stuuf there. I like the slide onto the floor at the end

Hernán Bruna:

A man? jajajajja

Cole Higgins:

not really feeling what your trying to say with this one. Seems to be moving a lot but the movement is not coming from an insode soure like her emotions. Your movement seems to be driven by the dialigue.

Tyler Phillips:

Nice mechanics, could use a bit more polishing.

Aaron Clement:

Just a little too much movement. I like it how she slumps down... that was nice.

garvey harris:

again, animating ability is there, its the interpretation of how to act out the part and it got weak at the end when she was less active body and wasn't even active in her facial expression to make up, but good work

Giorgio Alberto Rodriguez:

i don't like the movemet from 125 to 138...there needs more arc ! but it still a great job !!!

Ezra Allen:

yeah nice I like the way she slumps at the end. Im not sure if theres some problems with the lip synch though hard to judge because shes moving a lot and the camera is quite far out. Nice to see a different take nice anim.

Dan Dulberger:

Ouch that must've hurt! Animation looks pretty smooth. Not sure if all that motion is very well motivated though.

Bilal Ahmad:

good effort man!

Simon Bean:

Like the way you've taking the bull by the horns and done some expressive full body animation. Not sure the character really feels like it's addressing anyone? Good animation skills, but i would think a little more about your acting. Could you film yourself acting through these motions and make it look convincing enough to be in a film? Animation needs hyper-realism to prevent action looking flat, but for subtle acting sometimes dialling it down pays dividends. Hope this helps :) Great effort!

miles southan:

Nice work! The middle is a little muddy though because youre kind of just floating the body around and not really hitting any particular pose.

Mike Courtney:

When the character leans out at "give in" the hand stays oriented to the wall but translates to stay with the body. Nice work sliding down the wall.

Renzo Biffa E.:

It seems that the character is alive and that’s good, sorry for my english.

Micah Betts:

Great job, smooth transitions and effective poses

Andrion Becker:

you've got some nice motion in there, but the dialog doesn't really match the the motion when he sits at 205, I think you may have been better off going with a different acting choice or timing it so that she hits the floor when she's in between words perhaps? It is entertaining to watch though

Felix:

nice animation... but needs more dynamics. too static. expression is realy nice :)

Phillip Moon:

Really liked the body motion, but needs more focus on the face.

Sean Graham:

Good work here!

Taber Dunipace:

This is about as much movement as is reasonably possible to put in this dialog. Most of this performance reads well and seems genuine, though it's just a bit on the hectic side. Going a little slower with a little less action would've been preferable.

Virgil Mihailescu:

that was an abrupt fall... she could have taken a little bit more time to slide along the wall

Gregory Marlow:

feels a little floaty

Paulo Clayton:

Character definitely has realistic emotion, well expressed from one gesture to the next.

Alonso Soriano:

movement all looks great. Acting is a little too big for this dialogue I think

Victor Wong:

Definitely more SI/SO is needed in the gestures in general. Good gesture timing with the sob.

Robert Tighe:

This is nice. I like the posing. Not sure the collapse works but nice effort anyway!

Andy van Straten:

that slide down the wall and impact at the bottom is pretty smooth.. original idea too, well done

Carlos Fins:

A lot of movement going on.. I would suggest limiting the movement to 2 or 3 strong points, and remove the part where she drops to the ground. A motion like that would break the voice up because of the effect the fast hit on the ground would cause.