Emmanuel Vergne:

i would say that in the end we should have a better view of his face -> see the mouth etc...

David Shum:

Doesn't look like he's supporting his weight with his left arm.

Mike Courtney:

the torso seems very stiff in the beginning, perhaps the character should shift his weight in the chair

Paul Naas:

Good idea - love the faceplant. A little more work on the timing would put it over the top.

Mark Persson:

Very good idea, acting, character movement. Very good camera angel. Very good character gesture, it feels that character is alive!D

Extra: Very good color and lightning. everything feels soft and nice!D

But the mouth arent opening enough to the voice. When i looking at him it fells like he is whispering.
The fall reaction feels wrong. The shaking is perfect, but It looks like the hand is sliding away, like it was oil on the table. Bend the arm before the hand slid and the head bang!

Keep up with the good work!D

Todd Kough:

Don't be afraid to let the character actually hit the table, it seems you stopped just prior to contact.

Marco Palmieri:

not bad. but i always say, leave the lighting til last, only once the animation is perfect. lip syncing needs major work. keep it up.:)

cayle ward:

interesting... but the timing feels a little out of your control... really dig into the physicality and the performance points of the character and see what comes out. nice one !

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

floaty aroudn the you part

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

Scene need mayor contrast everything floating, the shake of the left arm is very good, try to make the impact a bit more powerfull. By the way nice rendering :)

cheers
/ Chris

Lisa Allen:

nice animation. overall movementsa re a little slow. little more facial expression would be nice too. good render

Shannon:

The beginning is very limited, and the head moves very linear. The end works a lot better than the first 2/3.

Aparna Varma:

the lip syn is a lil delayed in parts but other than that..nice work!
i like the head bang! :)

Christopher Pelloux:

Good animation. Good camera angle. Funny face when he hits the table! Lipsynch a little off.

sandeepan chanda:

Liked the little shake of the hand, the expression after he hit the table, but the facial expression didn't come out.

thomas reardon:

Good eye blinks when he tuns his head. His fall still needs work to be believable.

Roy Salamida:

aye mama, i like-eh

David Thornfield:

fall doesn't have enough weight...he shuld hit the desk and slid off of it ...plus the arc of the head coming down is too far over to the screen right...staging needs to have right hand stay in frame...goes out of frame and we lose some acting...plus there is a tangent of the left hand on the desk...its right up against the edge of the frame...

Amdbcg:

lip syncing off /sound of crashing doesn't link up with audio
good lighting though :)