Gregory Marlow:

floaty

Emmanuel Vergne:

Mike Courtney:

the fall is too slow, think of the weight of the character

Cole Higgins:

the animation is a little clunky. It seems like the poses are running into one another as opposed to transfering nicley into one another. Work on gettinh it nice fluid and smooth.

Pete Shand:

Nice one, lips are a bit off and the fall needs a bit of work

Sean Hannon:

Floating head and body turns about all that is holding this back. Good effort.

Mark Persson:

Good idea and acting.

Most of the movement are good but sometimes its to slow and to smoothen. The characters need to react faster when thing happens!

Best!D

Erik Westlund:

Frustration nicely demonstrated in right hand gesture on "...my legs". Fall is missing some needed weight and background character appears to float at the end. Nice gag with lap shade.

Joe Jacob:

Mouth movements were delayed in a few places. And the falling over seemed a little rough. But otherwise very good. The lampshade was a great touch.

Stefano:

The falling is definitely slow...

eleazermunoz:

fall floats a litte

Marco Palmieri:

cute ending! but the animation is lack-luster and needs to be snappier and the fall with more weight. keep it up :)

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

the fall needs work// it also needs to be more fluid

BigZ:

good try. need some work on lip sync and the fall

Nate Lane:

Sweet man. One thing that I think that a lot of people is doing wrong is that they're just animating his fall once the "whoa" is first said, but I think that you should show more anticipation for it and have him falling before he exclaims it. Otherwise its an awesome piece :D. Keep it up!

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

Nice animation, but need serious work after frame 166 then everything starts to swim. the facial expression is very good but you need to focus more on the key-drawings and hold those poses a bit longer.

cheers
/ Chris

Lisa Allen:

nice work! fall is a little slow tho

Phil Willis:

Kinda drifted down instead of falling under gravity.

Shannon:

The timing needs a little work--you have everything else there. The fall, especially, needs to be faster.

Nicolas Fourcroy:

Weight isn't good !

Christopher Pelloux:

looks robotic. Bad timing. The green guy looks like he's in slow motion and the falls looks unnatural. Why didn't you lipsynch the "wowo wowo" ?

Peter Satera:

lol, Love the lamp shade. The only thing that bothers me is that his fall is a little slow, you dont really feel the power in his collapse.

Great try though!

David Thornfield:

the weight on the fall is off...stays in the air for too long...check your arcs as well there is a lot of linear moves in arms especially the receptionist