Max Perelman:

Nice job--lots of run cycles to keep track of here, and the acting's good. The runs are all a little off, tho'. They seem very soft--I think because the leading foot contact happens way to close to the body. It's not out in front with a straight or nearly-straight leg, it's almost right under the character by the time the heel hits.

Traci Plagmann:

I like the moves at the end when he picks the arm off of him and when he says "no thank you." The running part feels a little mechanical though and like it needs some more weight on the steps.

Mike Courtney:

the doctor and the back man are on the same run cycle, give a reason for the tackle

Ken Rice:

Animation's not bad - but sorry, I don't get this one at all.

Cole Higgins:

funny nice concept and set up. I like the boduy animation, hough I think it could be a liitke more animated and ahve more wieght to it. I think that the facial animation is pretty tame. Im not even really sure if I can see his lips moving. I wasnt really sure who was talking at first. Really coo idea, nice set up. Just make sure the audinece knows who to look at. Its probably going to be the one talking so make sure that person grabs the attention. Push those poses and facial animations.

doc:

what's going on here?, i'm confuse about what just happen. nice jogging animation.

andyM:

not really sure what the story is here.
some things look promising, run really lacks gravity.

Pete Shand:

Probably don't need the shot at the end. The dive is probably just a little too fast, needs some frames to pad it out. Interesting concept!

Senthilnathan D:

good ieda...... good work.....

Paul Naas:

Not sure exactly what's going on, but very well acted. The Dr's arms during the cycle were a bit strange, but overall not bad.

Mike B:

too much going on for the dialog

peter wassink:

nice acting on the talking guy, but i have no clue what is supposed to be happening in this one.

Sean Hannon:

The guy who takes the runner out moves like a rocket out of nowhere. He can have a LOT of time trying to recover from an early stumble before falling into the main runner.

Mark Persson:

Good acting and movement!

Need to polish the idea some!!
All characters need some more polish for the running part. It has some small robotic feeling on it.

Keep up with the good work!D

Joe Jacob:

Very ambitious. Jogging seemed a bit in slow motion. But very well done.

Jr Prez:

haha that's funny.
needs a bit of work on the weight

Todd Kough:

Needs more movement in the hips of the main character during the run cycle. Also the glasses bouncing on the runner with gun is kinda distracting.

Marco Palmieri:

floaty movement. Not energetic enough! keep it up though :)

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

lol.. that was funny.. but i think the run cycle was kidna slow.. and you need to add more weight.. though it kinda didnt match the topic of the dialogue, it was still pretty funny..

Hyunji Son:

nice lighting and environment. I think animation could've been a lo

rushang:

as animation wise excellent but not appealing the dailogue properly

Omri Navot:

Wow. Very ambitious. Perhaps too ambitious. You haven't quite got the mechanics of the running or the falling to look realistic, and the acting is unclear.

Phil Willis:

Interesting staging. Original. I like it.

Nicolas Fourcroy:

i don't undestand what is happening

Janarthanan:

Good effort..idea is not impresive..

Niek Neervens:

:D haha very cool idea!! and nice animation on the bodyguard protecting haha i like it!

JAEHYUN PARK:

good Idea! but i can't really see his mouth moving...

Amdbcg:

great concept
lip syncing needs work though , and also your curves