Fernando Herrera:

Nice one! Just think it needs some improvement on the lip sync and facial expressions

Ryan Lowe:

Ouch! He hit that hard! Great work!

Mike Courtney:

small thing, when the background guy reaches out (about frame 58), it's VERY linear compared to the rest

Ken Rice:

Nice to see some urgency in the left character after the fall - I think your lip sync is letting you down a bit though.

adolfo:

I think the main poses should be stronger.

Michael Van Alstine:

Good reactions from the second
character.

Cole Higgins:

Great staging. Solid acting. Though his face and character really arent matching the voice. I dont feel the words affecting his body either. I thing if you push his face shapes more then youll get more life out of this piece.

Virgil Tanasa:

very good, i like it! :)
i would have loved to see a beat change when he's saying "and you want to call it..." seems the most apropriate moment, in my oppinion.
another thing is maybe the falling down, it looks a little bit "forced" but on the other hand is very funny :)

Javier Vazquez:

haha, great blow!! that hurts, nice acting!!

Senthilnathan D:

very nice...

Sean Hannon:

His turn around is way too fast, and takes away from the change in timing on the fall.

David Trudel:

I like the way he tripped...it was funny!
I was not able to associate what I heard with what I saw on his mouth in some case. Maybe a little more articulate lips sync will correct that. For example, on "...legs and my left arm 'occasionally'..." I can't read it on his mouth, maybe that his mouth is only "offsync".
Really good work overall, I like it!

Ian Johnston:

Nice clean movement. Nice pull of focus, the only critique I have is that the fall feels contrived from his resting pose. The fall feels unnaturally thrown at the character.

Erik Westlund:

Nice use of knife to show how frighteningly reckless this character is. Thumb seems to get cut with tomato. Business of background character is believable but pops a bit to quickly. Reaction to main character is good and doesn't compete. Casual pose on "And you want to call it a health problem," seems to arrive a little late. Perhaps there is a better acting choice for that phrase in this scenario.

Stefano:

the animation is good, it's just not very clearly staged why he falls...from the energy of the action it seems he does it almost on purpose

vince gorman:

good fall

Marco Palmieri:

some really nice animation in there, needs some work on the lip sync. keep it up :)

cayle ward:

generally very nice, but it still feels as though you dont have tight control over your character. I think thats probably because you are trying to fit too much gesturing. Less is more. But the knife cutting? GREAT ! but watch the tip of the knife for the first part of the animation, It feels "out of control"

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

love the camera shot. when he cuts the tomato, too fast. good stuff

BigZ:

ha ha... loved the fall...great animation but , just a thought , his left hand dosent seem like 'sleeping' more looks like its slipping. but really nice work though

Nate Lane:

wow what a fall! he should probably be dead from that :D . anyways great shot, nice poses.

Shannon:

Fantastic hit! Also, some nice subtle work with the face at the beginning.

Janarthanan:

good work..shld have fine tuned and some secondary axns r missing...the secondary guys axns r not convincing..

Srdan:

Nice work but the fall feels kind of unnatural.

Christopher Pelloux:

Really good animation. And funny :)
I really like how the guy falls, it's so exaggerated, I like it!

Kevin Adams:

haha :) really nice.. well done! :)

JAEHYUN PARK:

Cool!!! I like your body action!

douglas anderson:

The camera shake really helps, adds a nice touch to it.

Ben Crouse:

I like this one alot. The fall is super funny to watch, if a bit abrupt to start.

Peter Satera:

Not bad, the thing that really sticks out for me though is that your guy slips round, where as his arm would just give way and his motion would probably not spin him round as much.

Excellent though!

Daniel H:

Really good, but you need to work on the slide of his arm off the desk. As it is, it looks like he's just pushing off of the desk. I think you really need to just pull the elbow much closer to the edge, if not placing it ON the edge, making a slip much easier.

Keep it up!

Amdbcg:

great . sound of crashing doesn't quite link up with audio, though