Traci Plagmann:

Ouch - I might have nightmares from that syringe needle in his head! :-) Nice job!

Mervyn:

great animation but it would have been better if you had given a more shocking response for the patient when the dentist got up instead of the dazed look. Great job overall....

Emmanuel Vergne:

i don't really understand the final expression of the doctor. I'm not sure he has the right mood.
Maybe it could have been more "dangerous" to have his needle in his left hand to fit the text

Ryan Lowe:

The last bit of dialogue seems forced because he doesn't really "want" the help. It appears hes upset because he didnt help him...

Mike Courtney:

consider backing the camera a bit so you never cut off the top of the head and see the patients foot at all times

Ken Rice:

Pretty good animation - maybe better if the guy lying down closes his eyes if he's meant to be knocked out.

Renaud Déchaux:

The lipsync is not very good, and I don't understand why the patient is KO at the end.

Michael Van Alstine:

Good story idea.

Cole Higgins:

its ggo dnut I dont feel the words really coming out of his mouth. They are almost there but its a little off. im okay with the body movements but his facial animation mostly his mouth needs a lot of work.

Avner Engel:

Brilliant work Dave! Love the concept, love the execution and loved the overall feel of it. Well done mate!

Andrion Becker:

some blinks on the patient would be nice. Nice contacts =)

Pete Shand:

Looks great and it's a great idea, it's a little too pose to pose and some of the lip sync isnt quite hitting the mark, but otherwise very good

Javier Vazquez:

haha funny idea, impresive performance. Wow a lot of work with good acting

Gino Garibaldi:

Great acting choices, i feel that your performance is great, you just need to push your lip sync allot more.

venkatesh:

fine

Sean Hannon:

well executed all around. I would suggest that the second person's eyes rivet their attention to the needle wherever it goes.

Mark Persson:

Very good idea, acting and movement. Its very funny!D

Extra: very good background, lightning and color settings, which makes it alive!D

The other characters headsmash doesnt feel complete convincing. You should merge the head and the sink together some... and you could even in the end of the scene let the tongue hang outside.

Best!D

Sergey B.:

I love it from begin

Erik Westlund:

Nice reversal on the gag by putting the 'medical authority' character in the position of having a problem that he denies. Good weight on both characters, and funny punchline with syringe in head. Performance falls flat as he says, "And you want to call it a health problem."

Jr Prez:

that's cool. good job

Andrew Farrell:

great animation! just some narrative stuff kind of los

Todd Kough:

Had to watch it a couple of times to get the head hitting the sink but otherwise great job.

eleazermunoz:

I do not think that he ever gives the shot to the other guy

Marco Palmieri:

great use of this idea. seems like the only one that has worked so far. the lip sync really needs work though. but some of the motion is great.

Kensaba:

Very good story and good animation but the lipsink is ... too fast at "you want to call it a heath problem". And at "call" think uper tooth shows through lips. Chears!

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

haha i like this one..

Nate Lane:

Awesome man! I watched your progression and it was awesome seeing this shot develope. One thing that I think you could do is seperate the timing of the arms and head gestures, because right now they all sort of start and end at the same time. If you seperate them out I think you can get that little edge that would make this a really amazing shot, and not just an excellent one! Keep it up man! you got skill :D I'm jealous :D

Enrico Fioretti:

realy nice animation!

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

Love the crazy-eye at frame 1 :), also the expression on the patient in the beginning is priceless. I personally thinks when the doctor says "occasionally goes to sleep" that the hand gesture should be coming earlier. Very good animation, good job.

cheers
/ Chris

Emilio Aguirre:

I like it

Wes Storhoff:

It was fun seeing this progress through the WIP forum, good job man

nadja kapeller:

lyp synch could be stronger... I like the rest :)

Troy:

Fantastic idea. Good animation too. Luv the syringe on his head!

Stephen Sues:

Love the expressions. The dentist really seems overconfident in the first line, and somewhat disoriented when he gets up.

My only qualm is that since the patient is clearly immobile, there doesn't seem to be a motivation for the dentist to say "I don't need your help."

Shannon:

Really lovely facial expressions in here, and I love the fall.

Nicolas Fourcroy:

May be a secondary animation will be good because your second chara is a litle bit static. We don't empathy with him.

Janarthanan:

i couldnt figure out of wats happening wit the patien guy at last...is he dead or fainted
??y is he like tat??

Niek Neervens:

this one is brilliant! really cool animation!

Srdan:

Great work on this one. Love the expression on his face when he falls down. The "wo" part. Could improve the lip sync a little better, but otherwise great work!

Mark DAth:

Nicely done bit of animation, In my opinion the staging could be improved a little bit. Where the character gets knocked out was not very readible. This happened as the other character fell out of shot and my attention was drawn to this and I did notice the hit on the sink at first. Also it would be interesting if the patient struggled a little bit and the doctor had to hold him down while he talked. Well done and great idea and nice animation.

JAEHYUN PARK:

Cool!!! I like the idea and fluid animation!!! I think you should fix little bit of Lip Sync for the doctor but this is pretty solid animation!!! Good job!!!

Ben Crouse:

extra star for making me laugh

darrell:

Great job.

Roy Salamida:

EW! ouch da head bro!

Amdbcg:

I love the way you explain the audio!