11SecProject
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Gregory Marlow:
sound doesn't sound synced up right. But the animation is really good. Maybe a little too much activity in the mouth.
Dave Johnson:
I love what you did towards the end of this one, especially with him flopping the arm up on the table!
The screen right arm seems to stick in a couple of spots at the beginning, but overall I love this animation.
Really nice rig too! ;)
Daniel Huertas:
a little too much pose to pose.. but i loved how flexible the rig is and how you played with S&S... the last pose wasn't right for the audio clip.. it was cliche for me...
nice job overall
Mike Courtney:
nice fall, poses need to be stronger
Ken Rice:
nice animation - lip sync is the weakest part though.
Avner Engel:
I like the simplicity and comic feel of your shot. Nice use of acting within a pose.
andyM:
gets better towards the end, falls nice, whole end's really pretty decent
first part needs work though, strange thing happens to the torso around 48.
looks good, nice character
Javier Vazquez:
i love the character, looks great, nice blow also!!.
Sean Hannon:
excellent secondary action and body language on the second half; arm shake needs a bit more build to give us that extra beat to anticipate the fall. The first half seems still in an earlier pose phase.
Ian Johnston:
For the volume of the track I felt he was a little "tight lipped" and was being as vocal as the track. Good timing and personality captured!
Mark Persson:
Good idea, acting and movement!
Extra: Love the character look, acting and the background which makes it more alive!
The body lanquage is good but the face acting needs more work! most of it goes to fast, need to smoothen out some. And the fall feels just a tiny bit to fast.
Keep up with good work!
Erik Westlund:
Nice weight demonstrated as head hits table. Use of eyebrows for emphasis on "...occasionally go to sleep" but a lot of the performance is start/stop. Nice unity through color and staging is working to maintain focus. Embarrassed smile seems tacked on at the end.
Marco Palmieri:
best one so far. But i have 60 to go. Really great poses but seems to go from pose to pose too much. Especially the first half. Add some overlap and secondary motions. The second half is allot stronger and has a more natural feel and great expressions. Good work.
cayle ward:
really nice animation ! his scenario is a little unclear for me though... I feel you had very clear intentions here, but they didn't come out as clear for me.. he is being asked about how well he travels? the more i watch it the more i like it though...
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
this is pretty good.. but i think the lip sync is off 2 frames or so.. thats probably due to compositing..
some of the poses look alittle off
BigZ:
Great stuff man. First part of the animation looks a little weak than the second half.
Nate Lane:
cool man! I love the style of this shot. I think that you could of made it a wee bit better tho if you worked a bit more on the lip syncing. Otherwise sweet job!
Omri Navot:
Good animation, especially at the end. But the acting in the beginning is a little boring; the accent on "occasionally" is too big relative to what's around it.
Kris Staber:
man i love the character !!
nadja kapeller:
the animation before falling could be a little bit stronger (exeggerated) but I like the rest very much
Shannon:
Fantastic hit on the table. Nice little note with the glasses push.
Nicolas Fourcroy:
You need more synch between audio and mouvments
Janarthanan:
cool idea..good work..
Jarrod Anderson:
Love that fall and the resulting action, my only critique is that he seems to be popping in and out of these really strong emotions in the first performance. Perhaps make the emotions less extreme, or blend/introduce the emotions a little more between each beat? Nice work!
Mark DAth:
Nice work, but the lip-sync felt out to me. Mainly the first half. Everything felt like it was coming late behind the actual dialogue. The fall was nice and the get back up. Great how the left arm gets flung up onto the table.
Christopher Pelloux:
Fantastic! Very well animated although I think he falls a little too early. When he actually hit the table the sound is off.
Christophe Mauceri:
very cool, maybe the first two poses needs more overlaps on the arms. I love the timing.
douglas anderson:
I thought the expressions were the great, and its really funny.
Rohini Kumar:
I like it a lot from the time his arm starts to shake :) But I think the beginning is a bit stiff.
Daniel H:
Good work!
The fall and the rise after the fall are a little linear to me. He should hit the table and have a bit more side falling on the way down. On the way up, overshoot (more). Sell his attempt to show he's fine.










Animator: Chris Torres
Description: My first entry to the 11 second club but not my last!
Experience: Some
Time taken: 2 weeks off and on