David Andrade:

Great concept. Unique. Could work on the physics of the fall a little more though

Emmanuel Vergne:

Nice fall
I like the averall rhythm

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Michael Van Alstine:

Good job on the silent second
character.

Cole Higgins:

nice gumby like fall. Although his poses are kind of crazy. He almost looks like a blob at points. Try and get some more solid poses in there.

Harry G:

Nice ..... the timing was really good. Towards the ending wasn't as good as it had started. Would have been nice to have the other guy react a bit to the fall. The main character's hip deforms very bad at the last pose... but was very nice.... cheers !!

Mark Persson:

Sleep clinic... Good idea! good acting and character movement.

Keep up with the good work!D

Kim Allen:

really like what you have done with the main character. I think the timing and strechiness is great. Keep it up

Jr Prez:

that's funny :D

Marco Palmieri:

bit confusing as to why he's there. Some good motion. Keep it up :)

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

the pose where he points his hand down near the time when he says "call" just doesnt fit in right.. good animation though

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

Good acting, seems like the characters goes way back (the one in glasses knows exactly what's going to happen). Quick note when he puts his hand on the paper do it 10 frames earlier and maybe have him close his eyes when the other character falls.
/ Chris

Shannon:

Love the fall.

Nicolas Fourcroy:

Some good idea, but i think that you chara is a little bit too deforned

Srdan:

I love the part when he falls. Its nicely done. About his acting. I feel like he is overacting a bit. Think about coosing one operative word where he does his biggest gesture.

Christopher Pelloux:

Too many strech I think. Keep on trying

David Leighton:

HA! Thats was damn funny. I'd say the guy writing might be a little too stiff on his lower half.

douglas anderson:

I really like the expressions on the face, and the fall is timed out very well.

Victoria Alexander:

I like the rubberyness of his body when he falls, and when he moves his arm, but having his legs utterly motionless in the beginning is a teeny bit distracting.

Peter Satera:

I really like the scene. Line delivery and motion while he speaks is excellent, however the motion where he gets up though could have maybe been portrayed a bit nicer. Instead of having his body swing like a ball on string you could have him go to put weight on his leg and have it cave in. Also try get some dynamicy in poses. Nice work!

Alon Weissfeld:

Very Nice Man