Ryan Lowe:

Good motion! Maybe stronger poses?

Mike Courtney:

lip-sync needs some work, the fall of the hips at 165 seems too light

Ken Rice:

pretty good animation but I think your lip sync needs work and I'm not sure about the switch in camera angles.

Cole Higgins:

I have some issues with his mouth. I dont really feel the words coming out. It moves well but the mouth kind of bothers me. Also theres a lot of movement on your character so im not really sure where to look.

Christopher Salamat:

i understand your trying to give him an expression while he talking in the beginning but its really messing up your lip sync, it looks every word he's saying has an "f" sound in it.

Andrion Becker:

there's something awkward about the way he falls at the beginning of the second shot

Sean Hannon:

Technically very good. I wanted more information about who he was, who was listening, why and where he's going, all acting stuff.

Erik Westlund:

Interesting choices in staging. Land on floor after camera cut feels a little soft. Mouth shapes are not working first 100 frames of lip-sync, constant smile is a little distracting and hurts acting because there is no contrast in the expression for the first half of the performance.

jeff:

good ani bro.... but need some more flow

Marco Palmieri:

Some good animation in there, but I keep seeing these animations where the concept is not there. It's such a great piece of audio deserves a great idea.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

cool.

Nate Lane:

cool man! I like energy of the shot, but I think that you could settle in on some key poses for a tad little longer, that would really make this a great shot. Keep it up man!

Carl Bérubé:

Good work, but the lip sync is off more often than not, and the facial expressions are too important and exaggerated for the sake of the clip.

Omri Navot:

work on that lip synch

Shannon:

Generally really nice, but the fall is too soft.