Mike Courtney:

the red-purple man dies before the end of his last shot

Avner Engel:

The lip sync feels off

Javier Vazquez:

haha funny concept :D

Pablo Piccione:

funny idea! appealing characters! Very good work

Mark Persson:

Nice idea. Good acting and movement so the characters feels alive.

Exactly at the moment when the main character starts to fall it looks like the character is lifting the fingers slightly. Change that and try to make the fingers sliding of the rock instead with the bodies gravitymovement. And give the characters leg a touch of a shaking before the fall.

Keep up with the good work!D

Joe Jacob:

Great idea!

Zachariah Mathew:

That was funny.You put the dialogue in quite an interesting context ,the hanging with 1 hand in the last shot somehow lacked a feeling of gravity.

eleazermunoz:

more weight on the charter at the end. it does not look like he is supporting this own weight,

Marco Palmieri:

clever idea. nicely staged. but the expressions in the face need to be more clear and snappier! keep it up :)

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

alittle work on the body mechanics.. good idea though.. good camera shots..

Chris Peters:

Good Effort!
Screen R char reacts to the fall too quickly. Some of screen L chars "arched back" poses feel akward. Fall is a bit too slow. What is he holding on to at the end?

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

Great animation, would work a bit more on the balance also the lipsync is a bit off.

cheers
/ Christ

Troy:

Good effort and idea

Stephen Sues:

The animation's good and polished, but nothing is pushed; there's no sense of urgency.

Janarthanan:

good work..improve timing..and both the guys lack weight...work more on spine avoid un needed moves in spine of falling guy..the secondary guy looks lazy..ie., not active..

Aparna Varma:

nice follow through of the fall

Kevin Adams:

haha :) nice1.. like your take on this, good job.

Peter Satera:

I like it, nice piece of animation to go with the line. A little more expression from the character would be nice, but maybe that's me just being picky.

I like it.

Amdbcg:

lip syncing needs work,