Traci Plagmann:

You have some good gestures and acting in here on the main character. The left character feels like he needs a little more life though. Keep working on this - I like the idea!

David Shum:

Green dude feels a little floaty. I think he needs an antic, before stepping back (197). I like your staging and the way you play with props :) Good job

Mike Courtney:

the green guy has very little animation and appears to be an after thought

Ken Rice:

Pretty good animation - left character feels underanimated though.

Cole Higgins:

yeah its a good effort but I think it is still in the blocking stages. Meaning its about fifty percent done. the animation still feels like its being moved on its own by the curves and that in turn ends up looking floaty. Spend a lot more time fleshing out the poses. going from one to the next, Aticapations and settles.

Ian Johnston:

I like the fall, but in your opening poses, keep an eye out for maintaining a central balance for the character over his feet. He doesn't shift his feet so he feels off balance which looks awkward to us the audience.

Marco Palmieri:

Bit rigid and the guy helping floats too much. needs a good polishing session! keep it up :)

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

taht dude almost killed the green dude with the knife..close one

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

The green character need serious work, he's balance on frame 177 is off. Like the animation on the yellow character. Check the leftarm att frame 156. Otherwise good animation.

cheers
/ Chris

Kevin Edzenga:

The main character is great, but the green guy is hurting ya a little. Perfectly still in the first section of the animation and is already trying to help up the guy before he even falls.

Lisa Allen:

pretty good! the green guy could use a little work still, a little more 'keep alive' in the beginning instead of just those two poses, also at the end his movements are still a little slow and spliney. if you didnt want to spend as much time on him, you could play with the camera cutting, and just focus on the othe guy in the start. but its a little distracting that the green guy takes up half the screen and hes not doing anything, haha. good job though!

Janarthanan:

good work..and good idea..hope u din work on the second guy..hoping a better work frm u next time..cheers..

Jarrod Anderson:

Really nice main character, nice movements and good use of waving the prop. However my eye is drawn to the second character constantly, he seems to be too still, and funnily enough, I found myself focusing on him a bit more. Maybe tighten/speed up the fall a little too. Nice work!

Christopher Pelloux:

Good animation but BE CAREFUL with the passive character! Your green one looks like he's frozen a couple of times.

LizZ:

Green guy feels a bit drifty and his weight doesn't seem to shift correctly. You can also tell he isn't moving in the first part. Yellow guy could use a little finessing with the weight shift as well. And it also might be a bit funnier if he didn't look down at his hand before he falls. Something to think about.

thomas reardon:

Everything still looks a bit stiff. Green guy needs more work to look alive. The cook is swaying side to side way too violently.

Ben Crouse:

green guy needs something to keep him alive during those long holds.

darrell:

kinda floaty on some parts.