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Animator: Javier Vazquez

Description: A guy who doesn't knows that to have a light health problem could get some consecuences.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: three weeks

Comments:

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Ryan Lowe:

Bam! He hits that wall pretty hard. Haha.

Mike Courtney:

nice work

adolfo:

I thing the timing is to even and poses are not strong.

Javier Vazquez:

:D:D:D

Ian Johnston:

It might make more visual sense if you plant his hand against the wall first, and THEN crumple the arm into the wall following through with the fall.

Mark Persson:

Good idea, acting and character movement. The character feels alive.

But his gesture before the fall are to slow.
And then it feels that the wall isnt there when the fall comes. Make him first lean at the wall before.. so it actually looks like he is putting his weight on the wall and then... it can happend!

Keep up with the good work!D

Marco Palmieri:

camera shake is not needed here because he's too far from it. need to be clearer with your poses and less of them. keep it up :)

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

the camera movement makes him look liek hes small and inside a box.. if that wasnt your intention, that didnt look right.. also you should offset the hands alittle.. they move at the same time which doesnt look that good..

BigZ:

good effort

Nate Lane:

cool man! I think it would of done a really well if you put him in some kinda of a scene. I know this challenge is based on animation, but sometimes you need to give him a world to live in to make it more believable. I love how the camera is animated as a character tho! very nice work, keep it up!

rushang:

everything is fine and going smooth but one thing i want to tell u... when he stated falling then is miss the support and fall down and then his hand try to find support but here is not done his hand try to get support and directly going down..... watch it ....
thanx ...

Carl Bérubé:

Love the ending, but a bit more work in the beginning could be welcome.

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

Very floaty, otherwise clear animation but you need to focus more on you're key-drawings and build from them.

cheers
/ Chris

Shannon:

You have some solid animation, but you could have been a lot more creative with your staging.

Christopher Pelloux:

good work. I like the feeling that someone is behind the camera!

Nacho:

Great performance.

Wing Chow:

i like this one very much.

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