Health problem?
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Damien Pougheon:
way too much movments
Mike Courtney:
jerky in places, had to watch it a few times to understand the foot was coming up and it wasn't a rendering error
Michael Van Alstine:
Good head movement from frame
120 to 170.
Cole Higgins:
very jerky animation. Work on getting it nice and smooth. Its kind of hard to watch when its jerky and lacking nice fluid arcs and settles.
Emmanuel:
animation feels linear
Pablo Piccione:
Nice work!
Ian Johnston:
I like the pose before the drop. Most movements we make are fluid to a point. The movements of this character feel very rigid and unnatural.
Not Available:
You might want to make it less pose-to-pose.
Marco Palmieri:
He's all over the place! need to work on your poses. also calm him down a bit and let the facials and secondary motions come through.
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
needs to be more fluid.. and alittle too much symmetry with the hands. work on it
Nate Lane:
cool man. great work, One thing that I think that you could do is that when the audio says "whoa" for the first time maybe you could have him collapse on the table to really give him a reason as to why he is saying "whoa". Keep it up man!
Carl Bérubé:
Why am I commenting on my own animation? :P
Nicolas Fourcroy:
Your mouvements aren't smooth and the head move a lot, it's hard to follow it !
Christopher Pelloux:
Too many unusefull moves. Try to add weight too his movements. Looks robotic right now.
Cristin McKee:
Nice start but you need to focus on being far less posey. Think about posing the ideas not the words.
Roy Salamida:
too bobbley... looks like tay zonday.










Animator: Carl Bérubé
Description: A guy struggling to believe he has health problem
Experience: less than 1 year
Time taken: 1 week