Health problem?

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Animator: Carl Bérubé

Description: A guy struggling to believe he has health problem

Experience: less than 1 year

Time taken: 1 week

Comments:

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Damien Pougheon:

way too much movments

Mike Courtney:

jerky in places, had to watch it a few times to understand the foot was coming up and it wasn't a rendering error

Michael Van Alstine:

Good head movement from frame
120 to 170.

Cole Higgins:

very jerky animation. Work on getting it nice and smooth. Its kind of hard to watch when its jerky and lacking nice fluid arcs and settles.

Emmanuel:

animation feels linear

Pablo Piccione:

Nice work!

Ian Johnston:

I like the pose before the drop. Most movements we make are fluid to a point. The movements of this character feel very rigid and unnatural.

Not Available:

You might want to make it less pose-to-pose.

Marco Palmieri:

He's all over the place! need to work on your poses. also calm him down a bit and let the facials and secondary motions come through.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

needs to be more fluid.. and alittle too much symmetry with the hands. work on it

Nate Lane:

cool man. great work, One thing that I think that you could do is that when the audio says "whoa" for the first time maybe you could have him collapse on the table to really give him a reason as to why he is saying "whoa". Keep it up man!

Carl Bérubé:

Why am I commenting on my own animation? :P

Nicolas Fourcroy:

Your mouvements aren't smooth and the head move a lot, it's hard to follow it !

Christopher Pelloux:

Too many unusefull moves. Try to add weight too his movements. Looks robotic right now.

Cristin McKee:

Nice start but you need to focus on being far less posey. Think about posing the ideas not the words.

Roy Salamida:

too bobbley... looks like tay zonday.

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