Gregory Marlow:

That Camera move is completely unnecessary.

Jeff Kim:

The unnecessarily extreme features of the Asian character in the back really distracted me from the animation.

Ryan Lowe:

Wow. The fog is really distracting!

Mike Courtney:

the crash has improved since I saw it as a WIP! the lip-sync needs work though

adolfo:

The idea was very original and the first part was quite good actually. But the fall is a bit slow in time and the rest of the animation also.
I think you should have left the camera fix.
But great effort

Cole Higgins:

i see that your trying to get some acting in therewith his arms and face but in general its a litlle stiff and lack wieght and fluidity. work with your poses a little more and get more wieght all around like in his hips as hes sitting on the bike and his arms. As his arms move his chest hardky moves at all. In real life its hard to move any part of your body without it effecting something else on your body.

Javier Vazquez:

nice idea

Mark Persson:

Ok acting and movement!

The lipsync, crash and the landing need some more work!

Keep up with the good work!D

Levi S:

i think the motion blur was a bit much in this particular case. it was a tad distracting to me when the guy fell off the bike.

Marco Palmieri:

does he fall because of the problem? it's not clear. animation can be snappier and smoother too.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

teh bike flips too early.. got alot better though since the wip's

nyberg.christoffer@gmail.com:

Love the concept, everything swims you need to tighten up the animation, need serious work but have alot of potential.

cheers
/ Chris

Shannon:

You have the basics in there, but it's moving in slow motion.

Christopher Pelloux:

funny rain :)

Peter Satera:

Nice, i like how you went for a challenge, to get him to talk when he is on the bike with emotion is definetly giving yourself a bar to rise too. However, I didnt really feel the weight in the animation. It also could do with a good bit of exaggeration from the guy when he falls.

Nice work. :) I like it.

Amdbcg:

camera needs work, physics are also off - not curved as they should be realistically - please review physics of a bouncing ball