Mike Courtney:

the doctor's walk needs work, it looks more like he's creeping over to his patient

Cole Higgins:

try and get more wieght in your characterts. Right now there hips are sort of not moving at all but there upper bodies are doing lots of movement. Its quite hard to move around without moveing your hips as well.

Dane Winn:

bit too floaty

Mark Persson:

Good idea and acting. You have all basics movement that makes it good!

But the camera angle feels wrong, everthing are to stretched out, the characters are to thin. Maybe better if you could move in the camera view some and when the main character falls you move the camera again.
The main characters gesture are to slow and the doctors reaction on the fall are to slow.

Keep up with the good work!D

jeff:

need more acting

Marco Palmieri:

Make it snappier! and work on the staging more.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

the walk needs more work

Nate Lane:

funny idea to have him crawling away! I can't really make out what the guy talking is doing, maybe make that clearer somehow. Keep up the great work tho man!

Chris Peters:

Film yourself acting. Dragging a 150 odd lb body with one arm is HARD! it doesn't look hard here. Keep at it!

Aparna Varma:

the timin is good...but the hand move movement 2wards 'n u wanna call it a health problem" looks a bit jerky

Srdan:

It feels a little mechanical, his right arm could go for a little more power and direction. You could spend a little more time in timing.

Christopher Pelloux:

when someone walks the body goes up and down.

Daniel H:

The fall needs a little more follow through between before the fall, during the fall, and after the fall. The acting was well done, but fast paced.

Also, a little more follow through for the guy holding the syringe. He waves it well, but it's linear in form.

Good work. :-)

Amdbcg:

sound of crashing doesn't link up with audio