Austin S:

The rendering is nice! but the camera cuts are a bit confusing

Arjun Adhikary:

Looks great but Manipulated the audio

Loubna Khider:

the animation is good but you don't have continuity of your characters placement in the different shots, keep it more simple with your cameras, and ckeck the 180 rule

André:

The animation is good, but the editing needs to be improved. If you look at this scene as a whole, you will see that there are too many plans in it, which do not fit together everywhere.

Joshua:

You're technically not allowed to add 'silence' in the middle of the audio, but I still like the outcome, so I at least will not complain about it.

The Eyes are very expressive and the head and chest movements are great. But your only using one axis on the shoulders.

The mouths need a lot of work,

And the setting needs consistency. In the first scene, the woman is facing the man directly face to face. Then in the second camera angle, the man is looking to his right. Then the two are sitting beside each other.

Toye Shogbamimu:

The silence right in the middle is a little sudden and the lip-sync is a bit off, but overall, this is very good!

Madg:

Audio manipulation might be bad. But by animation, you deserve to win.

Josh:

Visually amazing,
but could definitely use a bit more time with the mouth animation. Just friendly advice, you don't really have to animate every word and squish them together, especially because they are talking so fast, if you want to, outside of the contest, try playing the animation over and deleting some words then just get the main word mouth shapes. When people talk they don't visually make every words mouth shape, some words almost look more subtle and morphed together with other words. : )