Comments:
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David:
The paper is really hard to make out in the last shot. The expressions are also hard to read. Consider placing the camera differently.
Josh:
I dont know what im seeing at the end, a empty page that takes over his animation part so we cant see his face during his line, missing textures? Straight hair
Animator: Lwanga Fredrick
Description: This is my work on this month's challenge, by some constraints I couldn't complete by I swore to upload at whatever stage I get on.
Experience: 1 year or 2 part time years
Time taken: Around 7 days