Comments:
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Joshua:
Would have been nice if they were in the scene together and interacting with each other.
David:
The shapes are a bit inconsistent, and it would help to place the characters more to the left or right of the screen, so we understand where they are in relation to each other. Look up the "180 Degree Rule" to see what I mean.
Josh:
a closer shot of their faces would of helped
Animator: Hayden
Description: Vanessa asks Brock why people treat her like shes nothing.
Experience: none, this is my first animation ive ever finished.
Time taken: four days