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You don't speak French?

by hui

Final Rating: 4.61. Finished 57 out of 117 entries.

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Animator: hui

Description: First time entering a competiton!

Experience: Student

Time taken: 5-6 days

Comments:

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Louis M.F.:

Movements are a bit stiff when they enter their beginning/end poses, but they're looking super fluid while they're moving, and your gestures have a lot of character. Love the pointing pose when she says "Problem". Experiment with follow-through and try having the characters "relax" into a pose when they reach it instead of standing stock still, that should loosen up the movement a bit. Your lip-sync is awesome though, no problems there. I see a lot of potential

Richard Adams:

Waitress is overly floaty. See Youtube about dealing with floatiness in your animations.

David Nori:

The movement dies at almost every time they get to their final pose.