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by TianshuLi

Final Rating: 3.67. Finished 58 out of 68 entries.

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Animator: TianshuLi

Description: TianshuLi_11scond_club

Experience: My first film

Time taken: 10 hours


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Animation is good, you're putting a lot more work into the cameras than necessary though. Zooming in and out on the mom is a bit too much movement for this kind of scene.


Such nice moments from the little girl, the covering of the mouth and change of expression.

Rishikesh Jaiswal:

The staging is good and the camera movement is okay. But there is a jitter in the animation that takes the believability out of the characters' emotions.