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Animation is good, you're putting a lot more work into the cameras than necessary though. Zooming in and out on the mom is a bit too much movement for this kind of scene.
Such nice moments from the little girl, the covering of the mouth and change of expression.
The staging is good and the camera movement is okay. But there is a jitter in the animation that takes the believability out of the characters' emotions.
Experience: My first film
Time taken: 10 hours