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by Ian Fearnley
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Nice gamer chair.
The animation is very floaty. To improve on this put a lot more keyframes in your blocking stage. Try filming reference too, it will help alot in subtle action and give direction for a starting point. There's a long journey ahead for you but keep trying! I recommend having a look at the fundamentals of animation and trying to incorporate them.
Animator: Ian Fearnley
Description: A teenage boy sat at a gaming computer, rigged with Advanced Skeleton and blend shapes.
Unfortunately, the Maya file has become corrupt so polishing this up isn't possible, but I would value any comments for future reference.
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 3-4 days