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by Nils Kuhl
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Good contained acting. Maybe a tad too contained on "curious"
Top 5 for sure. Perhaps #1 this month...wow...
Nice work. Just being picky, but maybe emphasize the "be curious" section of the voiceover. The audio implies more oomf. The cup-hand has nice motion, but the upper-arm stays the same size while the hand and cup don't. Almost like the cup-hand means to pull away in perspective, but the upper arm should change too. It happens a couple times, so maybe just be aware of those proportions. I do love the character and their expressions, otherwise.
Big eleven stars from me as this captures the best for the audio of this month. And you did not skimp on using every single frame as for that movement of life as it were!!!!!!!
Cool character. Especially I love the last cute smile. Only one thing bothers me, lines are always waving and this makes movement difficult to read, but anyways one of the best of this month, well done
Animator: Nils Kuhl
Description: Just a cat dad in a bar.
Experience: Sleftaught, but just started at an animation university
Time taken: 1-2 weeks