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a few too many gestures, but overall really nice character choices. I also like the chess scenario. Might have helped to have another character that this guy was looking at/playing off of, given that chess is primarily a 2 person game, and he seems to be talking to somebody. Great work overall though! very believable.
Description: Malcolm is playing chess with his friend and he remembers an instructive memory
Experience: 14 years
Time taken: 5 days