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Detectives in the rain
by Israel Silva
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I like the hat blur.
gave a 9 stars for this one..
great under acting where it needed to be for the accents on the movement for the lipsync
Wanna see more from u in the next compeptitilon and future ones also!!!!!
I like the idea you came up with, body language works well. But entire character including head and face needs to move, not just bits of it. Try to avoid copy-pasting character drawings or bits of character drawings. Lip syncing and facial expressiveness actually works pretty well here. Reminds me a little bit of "Peanuts".
Here's some fast action, with the limbs moving like whips. This is a LOT stronger with sharper, more vectorlike drawings. Focus on ink and deliberation!
Animator: Israel Silva
Description: Two detectives talk outside a mansion in the rain.
Experience: Hobbyist without training
Time taken: 10 hours