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by Joey Byun
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The animation is good and quite creative (except the swaying head in the beginning and some weird body timing ). the facial expression is on point and actually convey your vision ( the eye widen at the end etc )
The body acting is overwhelming the facial animation. Try to scale back and stick to fewer but stronger poses. I like his whatever pose though.
i like that render, animation is good too, yeah concept is good too
Flow is really good. The apart and together movement of the hands might not be needed.
Animator: Joey Byun
Description: The two buddies used to work together, and one of them is making a confession to take the milk money.
Time taken: 2 weeks