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The animation is okay. However, these poses are quite uninteresting. While the lip sync does follow phoneme mouth chart correctly but I feel the mouth movement is too pronounce for the line that the character is speaking.
Lesser mouth movements and poses. I think if the animation could be simplified it might turn out pretty nice.
Nice composition and acting choices. I think that sort of uneasy shuffling (70-120) looks a little awkward because it feels like it should be a whole body thing with the weight shifting from side to side and its relegated to only the upper body.
Animator: Laura Fuentes
Description: This is my first time submitting to 11 Second Club. It was a lot of fun to animate and I hope you enjoy it.
If you wanna see more of my work find me on Vimeo at /laurafp
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: A week and a half