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Good Grief (sort of)

by Matthew Koh

Final Rating: 6.03. Finished 21 out of 128 entries.

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Animator: Matthew Koh

Description: This is my first attempt to animate at 6fps.

Experience: 6 years

Time taken: 3 weeks

Comments:

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Samuel Bourland:

Good job on the boy on the left. For the boy on the right his body motions are distracting from his dialogue. Maybe have him pause a bit when he speaks to draw attention to the important parts.

Elle:

Love the characters! the sandwich guy looks like he is staring at the other kids candy. Un-clear if he is suppose to be or not

Brian W.:

Very nice. Simple but effective.

Florian Linet:

seems a little linear