Celiene:

Love your cute little characters but the lip sync isn't right at all. Keep trying.

Paula Gail Grisell-Goldstein:

Very whimsical. Try adding more movement to the characters.

Sabrina Winkel:

Looks like the bird got some lunch! But have the characters move. Not just their mouthes

Byron Pockrandt:

Add some eye movement. Add some body movement. Add some breakdowns with the birds mouth at the end.

John Sloan:

Funny, but the animation is incredibly basic.