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Julien Ferritto:
Love the idea, love the acting, love everything ! Fantastic job !
Tomasz Grenda:
expet having him running front of cam u culd make a better cut and sell the gag better at the end :) lipcsyn is off a bit plus jump from bike is not so strong like his reaction on the bike:)
Ed Seager:
Nice facial animation :)
Moby:
Smooth
Kamal Bhattacharjee:
Nice! But you have to control the intensity of lip-sync according to the voice modulation...
kail.li:
Great ! like the timing
Ian Alexander Hanson:
Cool concept and decent execution! Like the riding on the horse and how it loses energy.
Movements erratic, watch arcs, watch weighting. End shot should be more 3/4.
San Mathew:
Fantastic animation! Very inspiring....I'm so jealous :(
Terressa:
Very well done. Lots of squash and stretch, anticipation, arcing motions, the jumps both look fantastic. The only thing I think could be done is to push the squash pose a bit more forward before the leap up onto the scooter, other than that this is wonderful!
Celia Bullwinkel:
Great animation and rendering. Watch the audio distortion, though.
Nicolás Rafael Suazo Monsalve:
Good! Really good poses and awesome flow.
There is a little cut on camera a little bit weird and I would like some more expresive or exagerated poses, other than that feels great.
Danny Kneip:
Adorable characters, strong lip sync and acting choices. The animation is very strong, especially the walking. The motion blur needs tweaking, as an aside, but overall, a very enjoyable piece!
Masoud Ebrahimi:
Good Job !
David Cazeaux:
awesome work !
Maybe it would have recquired some extra stretchs on the eyes and mouth, particulary with that kind of cartoony design.
some of the key poses should have be a lot more silhouette.
anyway that rocks !!!
Animator: Peyman Bodaghi
Description: Please eCritique My Animate. Thank You.
Experience: 6 Years
Time taken: 2 Week part Time