Final Rating: 3.30. Finished 121 out of 164 entries.

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Animator: Cody Hernandez

Description: Greg has just walked in to buy a new Toilet at his local hardware store. The store clerk has sat
him down to look at a magazine of their latest versions.

Experience: 3 months

Time taken: 10 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

William Barry Eggington:

The way you have this set up, I was disappointed that he didn't jump back and knock all the stuff off the shelves. :-)

Ian Alexander Hanson:

Like the bg, like the concept.

Use hips in sitting, use more spine, use more fast-slow variance, poses are quite dry and reptitive.


The lip sync is not reading well, the face is down too much and even then does not seem to match the dialogue. The character lacks the energy to match the dialogue. I would revisit the principles of squash and stretch, anticipation, pull the camera in for a stronger composition and create arcs in movement and create drag in the arm movements and more up and down in the root.