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Everything looks real good from frame 0 - 390, after that i think the characters acting became unrealistic and snappy. Still Good :)
William Barry Eggington:
I love what you did with Doc.
Wow really good.
Love the characters! The expressions are great!!
This started off really good, but then the last few seconds felt really overacted. I also wouldn't have moved his head infront of the doctor at frame 180.
Concept is simple and the gestures are kept to a minimum. Except in the end when he has a new gesture for every key word spoken! Even "me" he points to himself. Marty's acting choices in the beginning are pretty solid and believable. The lip sync is mostly pretty good - the best I've seen for this particular rig.
Ian Alexander Hanson:
Really like the layout and use of space.
Body conflicts with itself too much and arcs are not followed. Also watch fast and slow. Way too much for Doc to swing arm at kick (which is late) and then up at plutonium. Just seems too over the top.
Not bad at all!
Great animation on the doctor! I like his little glasses push-up too(I have glasses and do that all the time). The first guy's lip sync needs a little work though, make sure you're hitting all the right phenomes and not just trying to say words.
Nice expressions. Good poses.
Animator: Stephane Sourdeval
Description: A young man discovers the project of his friend!
Experience: 2 years as student
Time taken: around 3 weeks