Final Rating: 4.13. Finished 75 out of 164 entries.

355 views including the voting period.


Animator: Michael Long

Description: Young guy’s talking to his neighbor who’s made a rocket.

Experience: Michael Long DAVE student - Michael Long

Time taken: 10 days


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Ed Seager:

Good face at the end :)

Ian Alexander Hanson:

Cool setup and I like the eyes at plutonium.

Use more spine, watch knee pops, arms crossed is not working correctly. Last pose good but could be more exaggerated.


I like the establishing shot and the composition of the piece. If we could get more of a 3/4 view on the character and more dynamic poses with strong silhouettes, the energy would match the dialogue. The facial expressions are working very well. The hand locking on the elbow needs to loosen up and not feel so locked, animating slight movements in the fingers and upper part of the left arm would help.