Final Rating: 4.61. Finished 65 out of 183 entries.

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Animator: Beiyi Chua

Description: Still learning ~Accept everyone's comments

Experience: student

Time taken: 1week


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Tim Evans:

Good poses though the transitions are too frequent and feel disconnected by the end. I think choosing maybe 2 or 3 key poses to emote the sentences instead of so many. Simplicity would be key here. Good scenario and idea though.

Paul Wei:

Starts out strong but seems like you ran out of time to polish and smooth out the end.

Em Harrenstein:

He is moving around way too much.