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don't be scared...

by David

Final Rating: 4.28. Finished 78 out of 183 entries.

28 views including the voting period.


Animator: David

Description: a man scares his girlfriend showing her his latest discovery... the egg-time-machine!

Thanks to the respective owners of the Alex and Andy rigs, it was a good experience using them......

Experience: 15 years

Time taken: one hour daily for 10 days plus 2 or 3 whole afternoons


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Em Harrenstein:

Lip sync doesn't match the dialogue at all - mouths just look like they're opening and closing, and they aren't even moving when we hear the dialogue. Also your actions seem very over exaggerated for the tone of the dialogue.

Iván González:

Tiene problemas en las fisicas de cuando la chica se sorprende...ademas del fallo gravisimo de lypsinc. Pero creo que vas en buen camino, depurandolo se puede conseguir un buen plano.

Yuri Marcel Vieira:

needs some work on the walking and on the lipsync


Dolly girl)Cute boy)

Matthew Slanchik:

Really good, but the lip sync is pretty off.


Lipsync is bad. Acting is very nice, but animation needs polishing/finishing.
The stairs coming out and the character sliding his hand on the railing was a nice idea!

Babul Prasad:

Lipsync is not working. Need to work hard on poses.

Paul D. Cooke:

I love her response