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Really need to clean up those lines, it was hard on the eyes.
Aaron James Mongcopa:
Great camera subtle movements. I like the animation, it works! I can feel the intensity of their conversation.
Sean O Boyle:
Around the second half, the faces kind of lose any emotion.
very nice, could use more holds on strong poses
Lovely detailed characterizations and clean, clean work.
The 3-dimensional feel of this is incredible. Weak point of this is the lip syncing. Work on improving the mouth shapes to better match the dialogue.
This is really good! Awesome job! The only thing I can think of to improve is the movements with the second character seem a bit too quick at first
This looks rotoscoped, which doesn't really fit with the idea of the competition. It's very well done, but not animated.
Animator: Alen Burazerovic
Description: Not finished, thanks for watching.
Time taken: Couple of days, after work.